her pelvis is too big, i think. or her lower half is too big compared to the upper half/head.left arm(from our view) of the guy's a little stubby/fat. wrists. i think you could vary this pose more from the other one, maybe like hes reaching forward toward us, and see some foreshortening to give more sense of depth. this head seems to be slanting away toward the right. kinda flat, but i really like the general feel i get from the guy.
I bet you do..